Hmm...
Even though it was quite funny, there was a few little gripes with it.
Maybe the whole "Caaaarrrd maaaaatch!" thing got a little old a little quick but by the end, it was agitative. If that was the actual thing you was going for then well done to you. Because I wanted to cut up the little fucking bleeder on the screen - I really did.
Ahem, yeah - the sound could've had some work done on as well. Some bits were so crackly and muffly that it sounded terrible. I mean, the content was fine but it was really bad to listen to.
Other than that, good job. I hope to see more stuff.